Why Script Critique & Analysis Is Useful
Why? Poor formatting, typos, clunky dialogue, bland characters, confusing story logic, slow story development, and just plain boring – that is the norm. And if your script falls into the 99.9%, you will have alienated your potential client from ever looking at any of your works again.
There is no need for an experienced reader to slog through a hundred pages of amateur writing to reject a script.
Sending in your script without it first being critiqued & analyzed by a professional is probably a waste of you and your potential client's time.
The question then is how you know who to send your script to. Above I have a link to an actual critique and analysis of a script which I analyzed and what you can expect from my services. Also, is the rewritten script taking into account my recommendations and corrections?
THE FIRST 10 PAGES OF YOUR SCRIPT FOR FREE
In America's deepest coal mine, EPA inspectors, intent on shutting down the coal industry, face death as nature and a
malevolent being slaughter using mankind's deepest fears.
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You can decide if my comments were useful and if your script wouldn't benefit from a complete examination.
At a minimum, you will have confirmation of the quality of your opening pages or a cautionary warning that you may need to reexamine your script before sending it out to the world.
Our 10 page free critique will focus on these areas:
'It's All About Story! The Art Of The Screenplay'
What couldn't be done in 10 pages is to suggest:
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(your analysis from email@example.com within 72 hours)