Why Script Critique & Analysis Is UsefulWhy? Poor formatting, typos, clunky dialogue, bland characters, confusing story logic, slow story development, and just plain boring – that is the norm. And if your script falls into the 99.9%, you will have alienated your potential client from ever looking at any of your works again. There is no need for an experienced reader to slog through a hundred pages of amateur writing to reject a script. Sending in your script without it first being critiqued & analyzed by a professional is probably a waste of you and your potential client's time. The question then is how you know who to send your script to. Above I have a link to an actual critique and analysis of a script which I analyzed and what you can expect from my services. Also, is the rewritten script taking into account my recommendations and corrections? THE FIRST 10 PAGES OF YOUR SCRIPT FOR FREE |
In America's deepest coal mine, EPA inspectors, intent on shutting down the coal industry, face death as nature and a
malevolent being slaughter using mankind's deepest fears. |
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You can decide if my comments were useful and if your script wouldn't benefit from a complete examination.
At a minimum, you will have confirmation of the quality of your opening pages or a cautionary warning that you may need to reexamine your script before sending it out to the world. Our 10 page free critique will focus on these areas:
'It's All About Story! The Art Of The Screenplay' ![]() What couldn't be done in 10 pages is to suggest:
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