Free Critique

Critique the First 10 Pages of Your Script — Free

The first 10 pages decide whether a reader keeps going. Let’s make yours impossible to put down.

Send me the first 10 pages of your screenplay and I’ll give you an honest, professional critique — no cost, no catch.

In the industry, the opening pages are everything: they’re where a reader decides to keep turning or set your script down. I’ll read your pages the way a professional reader does and tell you exactly what’s working, what isn’t, and what to fix first — delivered straight to your inbox.

What your critique covers

• Opening & Hook. Whether your first image and first scene grab a reader and promise the story to come.
• Story Engine. How quickly the central conflict starts and whether the stakes are clear enough to pull a reader forward.
• Character & Voice. How your protagonist is introduced, and whether the dialogue reveals character instead of just delivering information.
• Craft & Presentation. Formatting, description, and the page-level polish that tells a reader they’re in professional hands.

Send your first 10 pages

Enter your name and email, upload the first 10 pages of your script, and I’ll be in touch with your free critique. You’ll get a confirmation in your inbox right away.