First 10 Pages Free Screenplay Critique

WHY YOUR FIRST 10 PAGES COUNT

If your readers are not on the edge of their seat, wanting to find out what happens next, there is no chance they will turn to page eleven.   My Screenwriting Credits on International Movie Data Base IMDB

You′ve only 10 pages to:

• Establish the tone/genre

• Introduce your main character: interesting, flawed, and if not likable at least empathetic…someone we can root for

• Clarify the story world and the status quo

• Indicate the theme or message

• Set up the dramatic situation – what the story is going to be about

• Capture the reader’s interest

FIRST 10 PAGES OF YOUR SCRIPT – FREE ANALYSIS

Your pages are Critiqued/Analyzed for:

• Typos & Formatting

• Story Readability

• Story Logic

• Empathetic Characters

• Dialogue (Exposition, Small-Talk, On-The-Nose, Chiches, Indirect, Subtext)

• Action (Active Voice, Tense, Concise)

• Originality of Presentation – Mastery of Your Story World

• Pacing

• Suggestions – Dialogue, Action, General

Email your first 10 pages to: dallashjones@gmail.com

You’ll receive your Critique/Analysis on your script within 72 hours – Thank You