The Script Savant
WHY ANALYZE & CRITIQUE YOUR SCRIPT
I've read, analyzed, and critiqued over a thousand scripts and NONE were so good they couldn't be greatly improved. To get your script noticed in a sea of over 100,000 yearly submitted scripts, your script must be flawless.   'My Screenwriting Credits on IMDB'


EXAMPLE OF WHAT TO EXPECT
Original Screenplay
Critique: ′Bull Dancing′ Highlighted possible problems
Analysis: ′Bull Dancing′ Pointed out General/Specific problems & how to correct them

Rewritten Screenplay
Master Document: ′Courage Master Document′
Screenplay: ′Courage′ Turned Screenplay into a powerful compelling story on women empowerment

WHAT'S COVERED IN YOUR CRITIQUE/ANALYSIS
Your pages are Critiqued/Analyzed for:
• Typos & Formatting
• Preceived Genre's
• Logline
• Story Readability
• Clarify Story Logic
• Empathetic Characters
• Analyzing & Suggestions on Improving Dialogue
• Tense Corrections
• Climax Impact
• Improving Action Lines
• Originality of Presentation - Mastery of Your Story World
• Story Thread Suggestions
• Story Pacing
• General Suggestions on improving Beginning, Middle, and Ending


STEPS TO HAVE YOUR SCREENPLAY CRITIQUED/ANALYZED
• Email script in (PDF/Final Draft/Word) format to dallashjones@gmail.com
Click on the paypal button and follow instructions


You'll receive Critique/Analysis on your script within 72 hours - Thank You

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